IS FUCKING AMAZING! Glad to see you're still making the Awesome Cartoons!
Strong Points and Low Points....
To be fair, I will start with the positive things about this collab:
Strong Points: Art work was decent at some points. Voice acting was clear, however not very well performed.
Low Points: This entire thing did not make me laugh. It consisted in a lot of 4chan references which if you haven't realized by now, is EXTREMELY old now, EXTREMELY OLD. I understand most of you go on 4chan daily but even I, who understand these references, grew tired of them after about 2 months. Please for the love of God, don't reference memes. And sadly, even your original jokes were sadly not funny. The voice acting could have been more "engaging" because for the most part it was not.
In conclusion, some of you capable of animating quite decently (Not the spriters, I'm talking about the ones who drew/created everything) and I think you should try participating in more collaborations, but please leave the humor to someone else who is more proficient in scripting it.
Actually only about 3 or 4 parts referenced memes. I thought the jokes were funny. Not everyone has the same sense of humor and not everyone is going to like the jokes. I still think your good points were worth at least a 4 though. Thanks for the review.
Oh My God! WIN!
Can someone please tell me which one of you fine sirs voiced Sarge? I could really use some great voice actors for my animation project I've been working on.
Also about the animation....it's perfect, just fucking perfect!
Again with the amazing toons...
You always make cartoon that remind me of the good old days of Cartoon Network cartoons while simultaneously making me laugh at things I'd see on Adult Swim, which I'd have to same is freaking awesome! Keep up the awesome work, I hope you put this series on DVD, because I'd sure as hell buy it!
I'M SERIOUS ABOUT THIS!
I loved the animation, very interesting style and 3-D work. However...
PLEASE redo this animation with one change: Make it so the surprised bus driver stops the bus, and then the bus blows up. This would imply that the bus driver was driving fast because if he dropped below 50 miles per hour, the bus would blow up. Then it'd add humor to the animation.
Aside from that, your character movement was choppy, ESPECIALLY AT THE PART WHERE THE GUY IS BEING DROPPED IN THE BUS!
Change that and you'd be one of the top animators in Newgrounds, or at least, one of the most interesting.
You're almost perfect!
The animation is fluid, the character concepts are original and interesting. So why am I criticizing you? Three reasons, the sound quality, the story, and the quality of the imported 3-D animation.
Sound Quality: Honestly, I could change one this about this animation, it'd be the sounds used. First off, the gun sounds in this sound like start wars laser guns, however, the guns like real life gun, if anything, it looks like they deserve a more modern day sounding guns sounds. Just try replacing that and you'd be surprised on the outcome. Also, try making the voice acting easier to hear.
Story: Yes, I watched the first part. But honestly, I am confused as hell as to what's going on, I mean, I understand that a good technique for action movies is giving you an action pumped beginning where you don't know what's going on, but as soon as that action dies down a bit, you need to give us an explanation as what is going on. Doing so will greatly increase the interest of the viewer.
3-D Animation Quality- First off, cudos to you for using 3-D animation, I'll give you that right off the bat. However, if you're going to do it, you need to do it good. No, I'm not saying it wasn't smooth, more like, I looks like you copied a really low-res picture off the internet which look like a piece of shit. If you need to spend a bit long so that way your computer can render everything in high res, do it. When it come to 3-D animation, things either will look like shit, or you'll look like a true professional.
As long as you fix those 3 things, I swear, I could see this being something made by some professional animator. Keep up the good work and keep striving for improvement!
Loved everything except the voice acting.
I didn't see.....any...of that....coming...WTF EGORAPTOR YOU ARE THE BEST!
Very nice animation, again, you know how to throw in the humor with the kick to the balls. XD
Very nice animation, I love how much detail you put into this. I really loved the part where he says "Squad come in" and the other guy says "Shut the fuck up!". XD
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