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BEST ART STYLE EVER!

I love your art style for this animation, you animated the people perfectly. The only thing about the art style I didn't like was your backgrounds, otherwise it was an orgasm for my eyes. The story was pretty cool, music was appropreite, except on the fight scene. Voice acting was decent. Overall, EXCELLENT JOB!

Awesome!

At first I though "THIS IS GOING TO BE AN AWESOME EPISODE" when it showed "Top 5 Boobs". Damn you for getting my hopes up!!! XD Otherwise good episode.

Awesome.

Nice animation, but if it weren't for the furries, I would have gave you a 10.

Very touching!

I was severely impressed on your ability to convey emotion into a flash video, incredible work you did. The christian part of it was not too stressed, which good, because too much would of made most people blam it. Music choice was quite appropriate, so well done on that. But the your fault was the animation. No, I'm not talking about the drawing, I'm talking about animation, how it progresses through time. Due to the mass use of Motion tweens, the movements of the characters look...extremely unatural. All out motion tween is perfectly fine for use in simple movements, mainly for dialogue skits (Such as most of JonnyUtah's aniamtions like "Tankmen") but in your case the style of animation kinda ruined stuff like the running of the kids. Now that's not to say that the animation was bad, I thought it was wounderful otherwise. Niext time use more frame by frame using Movie Clip symbols.

Quite nice!

The animation was nice, very smooth. You had some REALLY good 3-D effects, now if only it wasn't using stick figures...then it's be perfect, best Stick figure flash I've ever seen.

"WHERE'S THE WALRUS PIT?"

Art was amazing, it was funny as hell. But none of that matters, because any animation with Gooseman in it that you made deserves a perfect score.

Here it is...

You want useful feedback, here it is:
You're animation style isn't bad at all, in fact, I almost like it. But, just good animation alone will not give you a good score. First off, audio. I'm sorry you're going to hear this, but this is the truth: People do not like hearing a little kid's voice acting. Some music would really help, in this case, ambient music would be the best choice. So if you want to improve the audio portion, go browse the "Audio Portal" and find your self some music, as for the voice acting, ask around on the forums, BUT MAKE SURE YOU HAVE A SCRIPT. Now for the important part. Your animation is, I assume, suppose to be a comedy. Unfortunately, it was not funny. There was no punch line, it was not amusing, just a character (I'm assuming that's you) repeating "It's your birthday today." in an unfunny voice. Please, think a bit harder on the humor, or if you need inspiration, go watch some toons around the Portal. I hope this review helps, because I really think your animation style is promising.

Yusuf responds:

the guy there is ment to be me, so i did my own voice for that. thanks but usually most of a score is for animation, so yh.

Awesome

The part where he describes the tacos always makes me laugh! Nice animation and odd but funny humor. Gave 5/5 because this one is my favorite Greasy Moose episode.

Rest in peace.

Goodbye Billy Mays, we'll all miss your commercials. :(

Awesome!

Great as usual LazyMuffin. But why is this rated as an E? They F-bombed twice.

I'm an 11th grader who is currently majoring in computer graphics. I like swimming, FPS games, and most of all, animating. That's General Shepard from MW2 BTW.

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