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[The Kirby Collab]

Strong Points and Low Points....

To be fair, I will start with the positive things about this collab:

Strong Points: Art work was decent at some points. Voice acting was clear, however not very well performed.

Low Points: This entire thing did not make me laugh. It consisted in a lot of 4chan references which if you haven't realized by now, is EXTREMELY old now, EXTREMELY OLD. I understand most of you go on 4chan daily but even I, who understand these references, grew tired of them after about 2 months. Please for the love of God, don't reference memes. And sadly, even your original jokes were sadly not funny. The voice acting could have been more "engaging" because for the most part it was not.

In conclusion, some of you capable of animating quite decently (Not the spriters, I'm talking about the ones who drew/created everything) and I think you should try participating in more collaborations, but please leave the humor to someone else who is more proficient in scripting it.

FlashfireEX responds:

Actually only about 3 or 4 parts referenced memes. I thought the jokes were funny. Not everyone has the same sense of humor and not everyone is going to like the jokes. I still think your good points were worth at least a 4 though. Thanks for the review.

[Happy Birthday Ismail]

Here it is...

You want useful feedback, here it is:
You're animation style isn't bad at all, in fact, I almost like it. But, just good animation alone will not give you a good score. First off, audio. I'm sorry you're going to hear this, but this is the truth: People do not like hearing a little kid's voice acting. Some music would really help, in this case, ambient music would be the best choice. So if you want to improve the audio portion, go browse the "Audio Portal" and find your self some music, as for the voice acting, ask around on the forums, BUT MAKE SURE YOU HAVE A SCRIPT. Now for the important part. Your animation is, I assume, suppose to be a comedy. Unfortunately, it was not funny. There was no punch line, it was not amusing, just a character (I'm assuming that's you) repeating "It's your birthday today." in an unfunny voice. Please, think a bit harder on the humor, or if you need inspiration, go watch some toons around the Portal. I hope this review helps, because I really think your animation style is promising.

Yusuf responds:

the guy there is ment to be me, so i did my own voice for that. thanks but usually most of a score is for animation, so yh.